Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Your Blog

I like that you changed your topic, because there is a lot more to expand off of on this new topic. It is a really interesting topic and I like all of the articles you have been using in your blog. What I think there should be more of, though, is more of your opinions on the articles. There looks like there is a lot of information, but there is only a few articles, try to just do some research and put it in your own words. Also, I don't know if you are done with your research, but there should be a conclusion to your thesis at some point. Good job.